Changeset 2160

Timestamp:

07/20/06 02:24:03 (2 years ago)

Author:

jciccone

Message:

Text and entity updates.

Files:

• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/cross-tools/common/binutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/bzip2.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/gzip.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/man.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/sysklogd.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/general.ent (modified) (2 diffs)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/packages.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/patches.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/audience.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/cross-tools/common/binutils.xml

@@ -126 +126 @@
-        <listitem>
-          <para>This checks the host environment and makes sure all the
-b
+B
-        </listitem>
-      </varlistentry>

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/bzip2.xml

@@ -45 +45 @@
-<screen os="p6"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&bzip2-remove_tempfile-patch;</userinput></screen>
-
-
+
+
+
-
-<screen os="s2"><userinput>cp Makefile{,.orig}

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/gzip.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
-    <title>Installation of Gzip</title>
-
-.
-First, 
- Second,
-
+:
+
+, and
+:
-
-<screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gzip-security_fix-patch;</userinput></screen>

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/man.xml

@@ -118 +118 @@
-    <para os="v">Additional information with regards to the compression of
-    man and info pages can be found in the BLFS book at
-cvs
+svn
-
-  </sect2>

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/final-system/common/sysklogd.xml

@@ -27 +27 @@
-
-    <para os="a">The following patch fixes various issues, including a
-
+:
-
-<screen os="b"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&sysklogd-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/general.ent

@@ -3 +3 @@
-<!ENTITY month "07"> <!-- Use two digits -->
-<!ENTITY month_name "July">
-6
+9
-<!ENTITY year "2006"> <!-- Use four digits -->
-
@@ -19 +19 @@
-
-<!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">
-
+
+
-<!ENTITY blfs-root "&lfs-root;blfs/">
-lfs-root;faq/
+clfs-wiki;wiki/faq
-<!ENTITY hints-root "&lfs-root;hints/downloads/files/">
-<!ENTITY hints-index "&lfs-root;hints/list.html">
-<!ENTITY livecd-root "&lfs-root;livecd/">
-root
-root
+wiki
+wiki
-
-<!ENTITY gnu "http://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/">

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml

@@ -69 +69 @@
-      mean that we will not help you. After all, the CLFS project is
-      about personal preference. Be upfront about any changes to
-, 
+—
-      possible causes of your problem.</para>
-    </note>

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
-  &releasedate;. If this book is more than six months old, a newer and better
-  version is probably already available. To find out, please check one of the
-root
+wiki
-
-  <para>Below is a list of detailed changes made since the previous release of

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
-    locations, and additional information, visit
-    <ulink url="&lfs-root;mail.html"/>. For mailing lists specifically
-root
+wiki
-
-  </sect2>
@@ -76 +76 @@
-    convenient. Please visit the LFS website at <ulink
-    url="&lfs-root;mirrors.html"/> for a list of current mirrors of
-root
+wiki
-    mirrors of CLFS.</para>
-

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
-  most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
-  alternative means of downloading discussed at <ulink
-clfs-root;wiki/download
+packages-root;
-
-  <para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere
@@ -42 +42 @@
-<screen><userinput>mkdir -v $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen>
-
-<quote>Sticky</quote>
-eans that even if multiple users have write permission on a
-directory, only the owner of a file can delete the file within a
-sticky directory. The following command will enable the write and
-
+When a directory is
+arked <quote>sticky</quote>, that means that even if multiple users have
+write permission on that directory, any file within that directory can only be
+deleted or modified by its owner. The following command will enable the
+write and 
-
-<screen><userinput>chmod -v a+wt $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen>

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml

@@ -15 +15 @@
-  fixed by the maintainer. The patches also make small modifications to
-  make the packages easier to work with. The following patches will be
-n
+
-
-  <variablelist role="materials">

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/packages.ent

@@ -1 +1 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-
-http://cross-lfs.org/
+&clfs-root;
-
-<!-- Note: For empty *-home entities use " " not "" -->

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/patches.ent

@@ -1 +1 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-
-http://cross-lfs.org/
+&clfs-root;
-
-<!-- Start of Common Patches -->

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/audience.xml

@@ -68 +68 @@
-  correctly and adequately fixes the problem.</para>
-
-
+Cross 
-  foundation-level system. Readers who do not wish to build their own
-  Linux system from scratch may not benefit from the information in this

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
-  improvements to the Linux From Scratch system.</para>
-
-
+n
-  class processor.  With the advent of the Athlon 64 and Intel EM64T
-  processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
@@ -40 +40 @@
-
-  <para>We hope you enjoy building your own CLFS system, and the benefits
-!
+.
-
-<literallayout>--
@@ -46 +46 @@
-Jim Gifford, CLFS Project Co-leader
-Ryan Oliver, CLFS Project Co-leader
-n
+m
-Manuel Canales Esparcia, and Nathan Coulson - CLFS Developers</literallayout>
-

branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
-  Linux software. A basic knowledge of the architectures being used in 
-  the Cross LFS process and the host operating systems in use is also
-
+.
-
-  <para>Because the CLFS book assumes <emphasis>at least</emphasis> this basic
@@ -26 +26 @@
-  provide you with much assistance; you will find that your questions regarding
-  such basic knowledge will likely go unanswered, or you will simply be referred
-
+C
-
-  <para>Before building a CLFS system, we recommend reading the following
@@ -49 +49 @@
-      <ulink url="&hints-root;essential_prereading.txt"/></para>
-
-LFS 
+
-      It includes a list of links to excellent sources of information on a
-      wide range of topics. Anyone attempting to install CLFS should have an